My own poem

Primary school days by Tan Yu Xiang

During my primary school days,
we had fun making fun of friends.

One time we had so much fun,
making fun of friends,
that we dropped to the floor,
and fiddled around.

I had a special friend,
his name's Fred,
and he always got straight F's.

Fred is the guy,
who looks for friends,
to become his fan.

That is my funny primary school days,
where we had fun making fun of friends.


About the poem
I wrote this poem to my friends to talk about the fun we had during our primary school days. I also wrote this poem to the audience to tell them about how we had fun during my primary school days. I made use of alliteration on most of the lines, all focusing on F. This is to emphasize on the words with the 'f' and to give it some rhythm. I want the emphasize on the words with the 'f' because, I want the reader to know that it is for audience is my friends(a word with the letter 'f') and i want the reader to know that this poem is about the fun(another word that starts with 'f') we had. This poem is talking about the fun I had during my primary school days, about how we had fun making fum of friends. This would be the first poem i wrote in my secondary school life.